The main point of feedback I took from group critique was that I needed to clarify my idea and research it further. Having looked into disconnect between mind and body and explored fragmentation of images of the body, I decided to step back and evaluate my real area of interest.
Taking notice of the group’s suggestions, I am now looking more deeply into disconnect in a digital future. Rather than only considering disconnect between mind and body, I am also focusing on a general disconnect between self and our surrounding reality that may emerge in the future due to the increasing prominence of technology in society, which is causing some of the younger population to become more isolated and less connected with their environment.
Sophia Tate 